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Consequences

Wasteful people all around
Slaughter resources abound
Killing trees oil and many more
Fuels once gone, arise nevermore
For the future thing ahead
The landfill you make is the bed
Your child’s child sleep at night
Packed in by filth and garbage tight
If you think this does not you effect
Think of every unexplainable health defect
Some unknown lung disease
Caused by a too common social malaise
©2008-2009 ~Living-dead-in-mi
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Submitted: May 13, 2008
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This is one of my first attempts at a rhyming poem. It happened a bit by accedent. I don't know the technical terms for styles of poems or anything like that. So Please tell me if this belongs in a different catogory.
Thank you.
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It's great....and very very true...

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~saurons-bane ---MEIN LIEB!
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Ah shit! You got me. --Hidan
thank you very much
And yeah, sad but true.

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*ForcesofAbsurdEvil
:gelphie:
Cheak 'em out cause I says so.
You are very much welcome

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~saurons-bane ---MEIN LIEB!
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Ah shit! You got me. --Hidan
Nice! Reminds me of the Catatonia song, "Fuel":

Doom looms large on my horizon,
mountain toxic, river poison
Fools get votes in a democracy...


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Salem Annabeth Vandekamp, :heart: 10/10/04-06/28/06
…And I will tickle her memories with my whiskers to watch her smile when she remembers how I looked at her to tell her I loved her. [~angelratdesigns]
I've never heard the song, I'll have to look it up.

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*ForcesofAbsurdEvil
:gelphie:
Cheak 'em out cause I says so.

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