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Absurd Evil

A critque request.

Thu Jul 23, 2009, 10:40 PM
I would love if anyone who stumbles upon this could read and critque my writting. I'm looking for coments dealing specifically with plot development, age level of the writing, age level of the plot/content. Characterizaton and character development, and any other sugestions. I am already aware of the bad spelling. Thank you for your time, and this of course includes my work on She's not nothing at ~Creastovel

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    :icongravitydefier:
    Thanks for :+fav:!!! :highfive:

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    :icondarkangel19:
    thank you for all the faves kelzor!! :D :glomp:

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    :iconbinarydigit:
    Thanks for the favourite ^^

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    :icondibbzy:
    Thankyou for the fav! :boogie:

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    :icongravitydefier:
    Thanks for the :+fav:!!

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    :icongravitydefier:
    W:wtf:W Thanks for all the :+fav:s!!!! :blowkiss:

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    -If you're going to have two faces, at least make one of them pretty
    -Hey, hey, hey. Come on. I know what guilt is. It’s one of those touchy-feely words that people throw around that don’t really mean anything… You know, like “maternal” or “addiction.”
    :iconliving-dead-in-mi:
    you're very welcome.

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    :iconismovaara:
    Thanks for the :+fav:, it goes were nicely with my manly pants.

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